It's fun, but it's not clear who's doing the talking in the last frame - it looks like it could be the same guy as in the first two frames. Maybe you could compose the last frame like the others, with the bubble coming in from the side and the talker invisible.
You know, I struggled with that. I had a version where the milk guy bookended the soymilk guy. It seemed confusing, so I ditched it. I like your solution.
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It's fun, but it's not clear who's doing the talking in the last frame - it looks like it could be the same guy as in the first two frames. Maybe you could compose the last frame like the others, with the bubble coming in from the side and the talker invisible.
You know, I struggled with that. I had a version where the milk guy bookended the soymilk guy. It seemed confusing, so I ditched it. I like your solution.
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